cool and chaotic

This is a nice little piece of controlled chaos. I just wish the drums had a little more of an aggressive sound. Overall, the sounds are a little too clean for my tastes, but the arrangement and melody are on the money. It definitely sounds like a skirmish.

great loop

Some real nice sounds here. I like the textures. I could definitely see a lot of potential uses for this sucker. Nice work.

cinematic sound

I like the approach. There's a very cinematic sound. The arrangement creates suspense, which seems to go well with your write up.

The only crit I can offer is that it just seems unfinished. I'd say you should definitely go back to this one when you have the time and she where it takes you.